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    Chapter 2 page 5 of xcom legacy is now up. A few days longer because of the faleg sketch. For full res click on here. http://thebritwriter.deviantart.com/art/Xcom-Legacy-C2-Pg5-686661869
    Jun 15
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    Jun 16
    Some things sound a bit weird, e.g. "A whole month you had this?" -> "You had this a whole month?". "Your throwing" must be either "You're throwing" or "You are throwing"; "You should, were" -> either "You should, we're" or "You should, we are".Some things sound a bit weird, e.g. "A whole month you had this?" -> "You had this a whole month?". "Your throwing" must be either "You're throwing" or "...See more
    Jun 16
    On that part it's my fault, while I asked for a spelling check and not so much as check on my style of writing where I admit my grammar could be better.

    A lot of it is down to me not having academic related work (even clerical duties involve short bullet point writing) it is actually how I speak. And other being I was in a rough class group for most of my learning years. I would love to do adult learning evening classes to brush up my writing but not many exist because of well, cutbacks really.

    I'll take onboard next time, though the next two pages will actually have no dialogue.
    On that part it's my fault, while I asked for a spelling check and not so much as check on my style of writing where I admit my grammar could be better.

    A lot of it is down to me not h...See more
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